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The Abomination?

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Chapter 1 freedom

On a planet far far away from earth there's a hospital famous for its medicines.
But what almost nobody knows is that the hospital had a dark side, it is filled with the most dangerous monsters from over the galaxy. And that they experiment on the monsters they catch and makes them available for hunters to hunt them down for a price.
And now we will begin with the story.

Deep inside the hospital the chief of the guards is making his patrol past all the empty cages he question him self if Spike is awake. He stops at the cage of Spike and listen if he's awake or still sleeping, a moment of silence then out of nowhere he hears a loud snoring coming out of the cage. And he knew then that he was still a sleep, so the guard screams wake up Spike you lazy ass!!!

After the guard stops screaming he hears Spike saying give me 5 more minutes, the guard says you don't have 5 minutes you have to wake up now we have visitors. Spike din't hear the chief and falls back to sleep, you asked for it Spike the guard grabs his machine and pushes a button for Spike's collar, shines a red color before shocking him awake. Spike wake's up after the shock and says you can wake me up by walking in the cage. the guard says Spike do you remember what happened to the last guard who waked you up? Oh yeah i killed that person and scratched the other one! ..... okay your right about shocking me awake instead of the other way. But how is she doing now? the guard says she's doing fine don't worry, okay that's good to hear, but serious now whats the planning for today.

There is no planning Spike like i said before we have visitors, let me guess hunters are coming. Yes Spike hunters are coming and very soon. Spike asks how soon, right at that moment the door opens and the hunters walk in and the first thing one of the hunters says where is everything all the cages are empty. the other hunter says sis over there is a guard lets ask him, good morning sir says one of them the other says yeah yeah morning or something. the behaved huntress says her name first hello sir i am Frozen Night and my sister over here is Crimson Flower, we are asking if there is something here left to hunt down the guard says the only one here left is the big guy in this cage. the other sister says he ugly monster show us your hideous face, and she goes on with the insults the guard warns her for the trouble she can come into Frozen Night ask what kind of trouble the guard explains that the bars held the monsters inside, but their attacks goes threw the bars without trouble and that Spike famous is around here killing the most hunters threw the bars. Frozen Night knew what she must do and ask her sister to leave the monster alone.

With a disappointing sigh she says do i have to stop insulting him, at that moment Spike had enough of her and trows his bed against the bars, Crimson Flower sees something moving for a second before the bed hits the bars and scared her, she falls down and her sister ask if she's alright, i am fine sis but that monster not when i am done with him. Spike is laughing out loud because of the falling of Crimson Flower the guard screams with a angry voice, HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU DON'T TROW YOUR STUFF AROUND!!! Sorry guard won't happen again. Huh i'm coming in Spike to talk with you is that okay with you. Spike responded with i have no problem with that. Crimson Flower says i'm going in to, the guard stops her directly you aren't coming in this cage understand, she says and why not, the guard respond i'm not in the mood for Spike killing another hunter understand, the next thing she says is huh fine i wait here then.

Frozen Night says your waiting to go in, you know me sis, just be careful when you do, don't worry says Crimson but her sis knew it will be soon trouble. the guard sits right next Spike and ask what happened with you Spike you was always happy end you wanted always to play with someone but what happened at that planet that changed you. I don't want to talk about it okay, i fully understand Spike how you feel but you can't be alone for ever you need somebody to talk with have some fun with them, huh yeah like that will happen Spike you don't know what life has store't for you.

Okay sis i'm going in, just be careful sis Crimson Flower is slowly walking to the cage but spike notice someone is trying to come in so he shoots a warning shot out of his tail, at the front of the cage you hear someone screaming, the guard ask Spike did you kill her he respond with if i wanted her dead i would have done it way sooner the guard runs to the door and sees that both of them are okay. Crimson screams out of anger come over here and show your self you Abomination, Spike runs to the door grabs the bars and shouts here i am. And what do you want from me shouted Spike with a surprise't face both of the sisters said why is there a human in here. his collar is flashing a red color the guard tries to warn Spike but he's to late right at the moment he wanted to say something he got shocked and past out. the guard sigh deeply you knuckle head you forgot the electric fence, the sisters ask what happened the guard explains what happened and ask if they want to talk with him with security of course the sisters agreed with it.

About five minutes later Spike wakes up in the interrogation room and he responds with, ohh why guy's you got to be serious  joking over here, a loudspeaker in the room say's sorry Spike you know the drill about this. Okay fine just let me be clear right now i ain't gone tell you everything alright miss ... , call me Frozen Night and my sister over here is, but Spike interrupts her there i don't want to know her name. Hey idiot here's a question for you why is a human in this place of the galaxy filled with the most hideous monsters and Abominations, with that last word she said Spike's arm transformed to a deadly weapon, so your a monster to huh and tell me how did it happen Spike respond with if you want to leave alive then i would suggest you shut your mouth right about now.

Frozen Night interrupts there conversation by asking what his name is, i go with many names in here the ripper, the slasher, the Abomination and some other names i won't tell, the name they gave me is Spike. Um mister spike can i know what kind of ability's you have, i am only gone show one of my powers look at my arm he raises his arm that is transformed a thin spike shoots out his arm and stops right before Crimson face. she got a shock just because she could have easily been kilt there but Frozen Night is more interested what else he could do, Crimson insulted him with full force and makes him berserk he fully transforms into his monster form, Crimson got scared at that moment because she sees a human transform into a monster right in front of her, Frozen Night knew he had a secret.

The out of control beast grabs Crimson pushes her at the wall Crimson insulted him by saying that she fought monsters with way more strength than him, he puts more pressure against her, the guards are starting to come into the room with tasers and starts shocking him after a few minutes of tasering him he falls down releasing Crimson. her sister ask if she's okay she say's she okay but she is in pain but hides it, the chief of the guards apologizes for the accident but Frozen Night want to know something so she ask't him if they could hunt down Spike. The guard was surprised that they still wanted to hunt him down after that, so the guard ask't and what do you want to do, are you waiting for him to wake up or do you want us to put him in your ship? lets do the second one okay, sure come on people i need every help i can get every one starts to pick up Spike but the head guard sees someone in there that shouldn't do it, he walks behind the girl and says, hum um lulu, the girl startled because she knew it was her boss she responded with hey chief how are you doing? Lulu what where you doing? Me i wasn't doing anything, okay so you weren't trying to pick up Spike while you have to rest, um no sir she answered the chief went for it, okay Lulu if you say so but promise me one thing go take some rest.

Okay chief i will, the chief focus't then at the sisters and ask't which one of you will be signing this contract? I will be sir said Frozen you take some rest sis, okay sure sis behind Crimson she hears a creepy laugh and ask who's there and a little scientist came out of the darkness and said so your the one to hunt down that wimp ha good luck with it. Crimson ask what do you mean with wimp, the scientist answered with out his big brother saving his hide he's a weakling, so take this he gave Crimson a serum with something black in it if you want to make your hunt really interesting use this then, Crimson took the serum she ask't what it would do her sister ask't with who she was talking to? Crimson turned around and the scientist was gone her sister ask't what that serum was for she said i will tell you when we are in the ship.

Okay we can leave now sis so lets go said Frozen, okay sis, so the sisters left the hospital with Spike in the ship. And so Crimson told her sis what she heard about Spike, huh so he has a older brother Spike wakes up in the ship, he looks around where he is but he feels like he's gone puke so he looks around for something he sees a bucket grabs the bucket and pukes in it, the sisters hear he's awake so Frozen say's go look at him if he's alright, i hope for him he found the bucket i left him Crimson grabs some bread en some water and goes to Spike to take a look how he's doing. She look's at Spike and gives him his food and water he pushes it away with his tail and say's no thanks Crimson sits down in front of Spike and pushes it back to him and say's you need to eat something, Spike looked at the bread and he picked it up and started to eat it slowly and takes little sips of water, with a surprised face Crimson said so you eat like a human huh, he looks up and say's i'm maybe a monster from the outside but not from the inside, she said sorry i din't wanted to insult you this time.

And she ask't him who was his older brother, Spike respond with he is the reason why i'm a abomination, but i don't blame him i rather see him as a real family member like a big brother who protects me.
So your brother is the real monster huh. With his last bit of energy he say's don't you dare talk shit about my big brother because he is a monster, if you say something about me i will forgive you, you talk shit about my big brother and you make your self a enemy out of me, understood miss. ... . Call me miss Crimson and i'm sorry for what i saidThank you miss.Crimson and he falls a sleep. Sis what happened back there its quiet. He fell in sleep sis don't worry, i'm going to give him the serum, whoa his body is reacting to the serum that fast, wait his body is getting warmer, the heat feels like home she lies down next to Spike and gives him a hug and falls to sleep. his tail coils around her leg, are you okay sis i don't hear anything back there. she pushes the auto pilot button, auto pilot activated, she take's a look whats going on back there and sees her sister hugging Spike, she slowly walks towards them and she ask her self why ins't he hugging her with is left arm she pokes his arm and it feels like the cold from her home planet so she ends hugging Spike to and falls asleep.

Destination reached. Spike wakes up first yawn huh what happened looks around him, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TWO DOING!!!!!! Frozen lets out a cute yawn and say's good morning Mr.Spike. Can you explain me why you are hugging my left arm. Because it feels like my planet where i grew up responded Frozen, okay he miss.Crimson wake up. Huh whats the problem, she screams why are you hugging me. Your the one hugging me all this time, and why did you hug me?? Because you feel like my home planet where i grew up okay. He say's okay, that's fine by me, but can you tell me what you did to my body!! puts pressure with his tail, aahh stop it your hurting my leg. Frozen points her weapon against his head i will shoot if you don't let her go. Don't worry miss.Frozen i ain't gone hurt her much you got my promise if i do make her suffer more than right now you may shoot me deal. She agrees with the deal, sis how could you, don't worry i will watch every movement he make's and it is your responsibility after all. Yeah okay then, alright then, WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY BODY!! I gave you a serum to make you stronger.

Okay that's it, alright then which planet did you choose to hunt me, he looks out of the window and sees the planet, your got to be kidding me the jungle planet. How did you know it was the jungle planet Mr.Spike ask Frozen. I got lessens from one of the scientists, this planet is one of most dangerous places to hunt down a wild life even pro hunters/huntress must be careful while hunting in this place. We decided you get one day to roam the planet before we hunt you down. Okay then fine by me, i get one hole day to roam this planet before you girls hunt me down. Yes Mr.Spike but only one day.
I hope you have enjoyed reading this story.
if you have any questions then ask them.
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